Theledge93's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[DH]Water From The Same Source]

other than the quality,

This song is put together perfectly. I can't give you a ten because the quality is lacking a tad bit too much, but you most certainly will get a five!

9/10
5/5

DarqueHand responds:

You say you couldn't give me a ten... understandable... except from the fact that you gave me a ten lol!!!

Thanks anyway!

[Millenium (Preveiw)]

more variety

I really like it, but it needs more variety. Like i have mentioned before, i have no knowledge on how to make Industrial music, so i can't suggest anything that would help. I can only point out the problems.

5/10 (because it's unfinished)
4/5 (because of the stated problem)

Pivvot responds:

Yes, I agree. It does need a bit more variety.

[The Last Intervention]

Awesome!

there's a clicking in the background i find kinda annoying. and the ending should be a giant finale, like a person said a couple reviews below me.

Great song. this has been favorited!

0:00 - 0:07
A knight opens his eyes. they sting from beads of sweat that have invaded them.

0:08- 0:10

He looks down and sees his armor is covered in a thick crimson liquid. his own blood. but then he looks beyond that...

0:11 - 0:23

He sees his enemy has fallen as well. the evil Drago the DragonSlayer. he triumphantly rises to his feet. it is almost impossible due to the added wieght of his battered armor.

0:24 - 0:27

He picks his sword of the ground, gleaming in the sunlight coming from the stainded glass windows around him.

0:28-0:55

He makes the struggled, but triumphant walk over to Drago.

0:56 - 1:03

He uses the last of his strength and raises his sword above his head, and pauses for just a moment.

1:04

He drives the sword through Drago, and into the stone beneath.

1:05 - 1:30

He staggers back, and drops to his knees. he looks to the gods for approval, and finally begins to relish in his saved kingdom.

10/10
5/5

dicennian responds:

You are the best reviewer on Newgrounds. I got nothing to say except for that. Thanks, alot.

[Birds Are Looking Down]

wow...

This a great combination of orchestra and DnB.

I like the choir the most. it really ties the song together. my only request is you put reverb on the kick. I'm a reverb junkie, so the more the merrier.

You use a really interesting mix of instruments, I'm starting to like your style!

You could probably use this for the opening to a LA cop movie. kinda Bad Boys-esque.

10/10
5/5

dicennian responds:

Thanks mate!

[Relive The Dream]

perfect except...

Reverb. you will find it is your best friend. add some to taste and it will liven up your song. everything is perfect. and i don't know if you use Fruity Loops or not, but if you do, go to Packs>Dance>Kick_3.

those are the most techno kicks i know. they will help with the song. if you want, I'll collab with you on this. if you still got the work file, AND if you use Fruity Loops.

10/10
5/5

Pivvot responds:

k but i dont use FL studios... but the program i do use has reverb so thanks for the tip!

[Creeping Darkness]

My mind is melting.

How you write industrial music is completely beyond me. all i know is this is a great piece. I can't really review this song as much as you would like, because i don't listen to this kind of music.

I think the instruments fit well, and everything flows like it should. other than that i can't really judge...

10/10
5/5

Pivvot responds:

Thanks and I apprecitate your reveiw!

[Glass Shards (Full)]

too good,

I started crying. i'm serious. (partly due to gravey's review.) you are entirely too good of an artist!

Aeris responds:

Awww :DDD

That's so sweet, you made my day :DD

[[DF] It's A Dream (DF RemiX)]

Depressing

the song was actually kind of depressing, it's probably just the notes. but everything else is superb! maybe change the scale around and use "happier" notes. it'll make a world of difference.

4/5
8/10

darphfluffy responds:

listen to the stuff i usually do, It's much happier. I was going for a somber tone.

[}Paranexium{]

this is good but,

the instruments in my mind don't mix well. everthing else is spot on.
the high tinkle doesn't mix with the rest. the song is a little too random for me.

4/5
7/10

757irish responds:

thnx ill keep that in mind thnx for the review :)

[{CC} Writing A Story]

NOOOOOO!

I was..going...to...zero bomb...but...i can't resist the snare! must....vote....five!

corncamper responds:

Haha.. Never zero bomb anything mate ;) And thank you. Made me lol.