this has a dnb feel to it. not necesarilly drumstep like nnetsky, but youve done damn good! my head was bobbing the entire. very brooding and moody. i love it.
Wow thanks:) yes I tried to make a dnb vibe to it also with some ambience glad you liked it ;3;
i'll right this as i listen.
Piano is good, but the guitarish pluck doesn't really mesh. it's a combination of the notes, as well as the character's of the two instruments.
because of this distraction, the beginning begins to become repetitive. i can see the concept for what you are going for, and it will work if you straighten up the battle between the two instruments.
the middle break had a lot of potential. my tip to you is, when there is supposed to be a calm silence or "breather" in a song, put a pad behind what your doing (in this case the piano) . actual silence doesn't sound right most of the time in songs, and should be taken care of. this way, the pad will provide a subtle movement and character, without imparting itself or heavily influencing the intervalic tonality (or mood of your chords/notes if you aren't up to speed on your theory terms :) )
Overall this was fairly plain, but has quite a bit of potential. if you keep practicing you'll feel and hear the difference between the instruments, notes and everything so you can help better setup your theme and emotion of the song. here, so you know i'm not blowing smoke, this is the first song i ever did. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/208774 i honestly had no idea what the fuck i was doing. if you need pointers while making a song, i'll be happy to help :)
i hope you don't see these as me critizing you meanly. when i was just starting out, and learning how to but my visions into material form, i wished i had more critiscm to base my learning off of. i'm just trying to help you succeed at what i'm hoping you love to do :)
I love it! as always! i just think the tone that holds for the beginning of the song, (the higher pitched one) needs to be toned down a bit. it's quite loud for how long it is. other than that, i'm not hearing anything really wrong. i love the atmosphere! i love the thump to your kick, and am possibly wondering if i can steal whatever you made to make it :) you did a great job! i love the chords, progression, instruments and everything!
5's all around my friend!
Steal my keyboard? I'm gonna go right away and insurance that one. Nah, but thanks man :)
i like it! alot! but i feel like there's too much going on. ii know it's dubstep and chaos is kinda the name of the game. but you've listen to my track , you know my style. i think this is more a personal taste thing than anything you need to improve on. the pulsing of the song was awesome though.
5's all around good man!
Ahhh glad you dig the driving 4/4, I wasn't sure if that'd end up too monotonous. Lol I totally understand if it's a bit chaotic for you bro, v glad you still like it on the whole :)
i agree with the guy below me. you are really kickass, and have your own flavor. you manage to take a generally happy instrument, and create a dark theme around, and it not sound forced. your production is on point, your mixing is on point, you r mastering is even on point. great job man. i wish i knew how to get you out to the world, your great at what you do.
BTW, i was just giving you hell on the youtube video of this song :)
5's all around my good sir.
as a fellow musician, i can "feel" when another musican enjoys making their track, and you certianly did. it's all there. great job man! you did a fantastic job. try to keep that feeling of making this song in your memory, so you can make a shit ton of other songs that sound this awesome.
Thanks man! I will try to keep that in mind for future tracks
oh goddamn. we have a similar style. what do you think about a collab? this is off the chain and SUPER heavy....great job!
the lead melody is catchy as all hell. the bells or whatever plays it is fantastic. i love this! it's honestly a favorite! not too much, but not too little. you did a great job!
Thank you very much. Comments like this make me feel appreciated! If you like it half as much as I like your comment, I've done my job for the day :)
i like it! oddly chaotic (even for dubstep standards) but quite catchy. good job! i gave ya a 5!
your composition is definitely there, i feel like the "heaviness" you refer to has to do with mixing and mastering. i know a BIT about mastering so i'll download this, master it, then PM you the results and see if it's what your looking for.
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